On the blog, http://pagenotfounderror404.blogspot.com/, the blogger's claim in their fourth submission was, "Perhaps Ulrich captures the true colors of consumerism, particularly in America." I thought this was a strong claim, because it was opinionated, but still supported by observations throughout the rest of the submission. Another good claim I read was from http://assilem-sophie.blogspot.com/. It read, "By what someone keeps in their fridge or how they keep it, anyone can predict what that person is like."
Other blog submissions were not as analytical, providing too much personal description:
-"And by me playing that sport it allowed me to gather numerous of friendships that are partially still intact in high school."
-"When first looking at these amazing hand animals or paintings some may feel astonished or think it's unbelievable."
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